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Old 10-15-2007, 01:47 PM
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I just took a very brief look (I'm in the office and waiting for the computer to chug away on something).

On my computer (running Firefox 2.0.0.7) the images all move to the right hand side of the screen with a scroll bar at the bottom. I can't be sure if that's intentional or not.

I think you're underpricing yourself. Depending upon the venue, copywriters here in Canada usually get about $0.30/word. (Obviously, that's dependent upon the market so what works here may not work where you are.)

Lastly - and this is personal preference only - I think that maybe using positive phraseology may be a bit more effective. For instance:
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My personal policies, or those relevant here, are that one should not be greedy when deciding on ones pricing scheme.
may be better phrased as;
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My pricing policies are specifically designed to create the highest value for your money.
See the difference?

Just my $0.02...
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