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Originally Posted by Matt Willard  The basic one was "A Life on Purpose is a life of excitement. It is a life charged by inspiring service, passionate creativity, and blissful freedom." |
Ah! This is CLOSE, but it's lacking one key element...YOU!
You're not talking about you here. You are talking about "a life" (which is about as impersonal as it gets, buddy
).
Try rewriting this, but phrasing it as something you ARE...something that you are being...something that is all about YOU and why you are here.